Danny Ray
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I am your new #1 contender for the Shooting Star Championship !!!
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Post by Danny Ray on Sept 28, 2017 14:40:27 GMT -6
Okay, guys please let me know how I'm doing thanks.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2017 15:33:11 GMT -6
Well done
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Dylan Black
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Post by Dylan Black on Sept 28, 2017 19:15:26 GMT -6
1 small error that irks me. The few gramatical errors suprisingly didn't irk me but it was the fact you said Black was aligned with Rieter. That's a 1-off thing (for now, who knows what'll happen in the future ) but otherwise good job
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2017 19:24:27 GMT -6
Thanks, I was wondering the same thing lol
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Danny Ray
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I am your new #1 contender for the Shooting Star Championship !!!
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Post by Danny Ray on Sept 29, 2017 19:20:22 GMT -6
Thanks, Dylan but reread that part If I remember right I said I think you aligned yourself with Lucas or something like that lol thanks for the feedback appreciate it
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