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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2017 17:38:03 GMT -6
Okay, guys, I know you all look but hardly leave feedback please take the time to let me know what you think this character is extremely personal to me and I would like to know how it feels to you all. thanks
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Danny Ray
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Post by Danny Ray on Sept 26, 2017 19:19:27 GMT -6
I liked it keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2017 19:21:15 GMT -6
Thank you, I appreciate you leaving me feedback
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 26, 2017 23:45:30 GMT -6
Good effort. Could definitely tell this story was really personal to you.
Using almost no dialogue was an interesting choice but it felt pretty powerful.
Just be a little careful as this stuff may be used against you in roleplay form.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2017 7:52:14 GMT -6
Thanks, Bobby appreciate the feedback
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