Dylan Black
Jobber
Too Many Accolades in various companies to list here
Posts: 80
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Post by Dylan Black on Sept 25, 2017 19:20:32 GMT -6
Not asking for feedback on a specific roleplay, but how am I doing in general, role play wise?
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Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2017 19:23:25 GMT -6
As far as I can tell your doing great I like what you're doing just keep it up and always remember to build your story for your character
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Chaos Kid
Opening Match Guy
Ironman Champion/Tag Team Champion
Posts: 396
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 26, 2017 0:04:09 GMT -6
personally I tink you are doing great, you had a great match with Barrett, and that by itself shows what kind of a competitor you are
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 26, 2017 0:36:51 GMT -6
You're doing really well.
Being honest, reading your roleplays, they felt really good but then they stop. Your first roleplay felt really good (except for "sounds like teen spirit") but it felt like it could have gone on for maybe a few more hundred words. 1800+ will almost always bag you 4 or 5 out of 5 in that category. Then you'd have really threatened the title.
Great effort man
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