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Post by Maverick on Sept 22, 2017 13:48:25 GMT -6
Tell me if its good? Am i a worthy contender for this rumble?
Would love to hear the feedback guys.
Chapter Six tomorrow... Dont give your hopes up Danny
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 22, 2017 14:02:07 GMT -6
It's a good roleplay mate, just check that word count. You only clocked in around 1250. Another 600 words or so would see you pick up another 1-2 points easily.
Keep at it, your stuff is miles better than a month ago!
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 22, 2017 14:12:53 GMT -6
Not bad Maverick but adjust your size I had to squint to read most of it lol
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 22, 2017 14:15:40 GMT -6
He has trouble with the fonts apparently
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 22, 2017 14:27:51 GMT -6
Yeah, lol it was just a little hard for me to read
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Post by Maverick on Sept 22, 2017 15:30:09 GMT -6
It's a good roleplay mate, just check that word count. You only clocked in around 1250. Another 600 words or so would see you pick up another 1-2 points easily. Keep at it, your stuff is miles better than a month ago! I think I was just zoning out every 5 minutes over the fact that tiredness was kicking in I never checked the word count. I would have definitely added more then if I hadn't zoned out
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 22, 2017 15:54:04 GMT -6
No worries. There's always next week to add more lol
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 22, 2017 16:04:36 GMT -6
Yeah it's a great way to continue your story into next week
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2017 17:05:59 GMT -6
Nice job
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