Jack Diamond
Opening Match Guy
World Champion
Current (And First) ICW World Champion. Former ICW Shooting Star Champion (1x)
Posts: 332
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Post by Jack Diamond on Sept 9, 2017 20:51:04 GMT -6
Hey everyone! It's been a few weeks since I've gauged what you all think about my character and roleplays so I'm asking for some feedback here. As much as my character has going on at the moment, there still isn't a definitive storyline at the moment so my roleplays have been a little harder to write as of late.
So what do you guys think? What am I doing well? What can I improve upon? Any feedback no matter how small or how harsh will be greatly appreciated!
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Post by Maverick on Sept 10, 2017 4:35:25 GMT -6
I don't think there really is any need for change, just keep on going.
That's my opinion and I'm sticking to it
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Chaos Kid
Opening Match Guy
Ironman Champion/Tag Team Champion
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 10, 2017 4:44:39 GMT -6
without question you are the best RP'er here, and its always hard to keep on top of the mountain, I think that not having direction or storyline makes its hard to write rp, but you could always create one for yourself. There is really very little probably anyone can comment on for you to improve, as you are above alot of us in terms of your writing
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 10, 2017 5:22:01 GMT -6
without question you are the best RP'er here, and its always hard to keep on top of the mountain, I think that not having direction or storyline makes its hard to write rp, but you could always create one for yourself. There is really very little probably anyone can comment on for you to improve, as you are above alot of us in terms of your writing Probably spot on here. I said on Twitter than you have no doubt turned out stronger stuff, but if this is what you consider weak, we have a lot of work to do!
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 11, 2017 15:44:47 GMT -6
THAT'S WHY YOU'RE THE WORLD CHAMP!!!!
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Deleted
Deleted Member
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2017 17:18:23 GMT -6
Always great
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