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Post by Maverick on Sept 7, 2017 12:31:53 GMT -6
leave all feedback here please! i worked my ass off on this for near 6 hours straight and i am going for a walk. i will check up on it on my phone
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 7, 2017 12:42:37 GMT -6
By far, your beat effort yet in my opinion. Love how you're embracing the Irish heritage with "shite" in was waiting for a "feck" lol.
Well done man!
Only criticism is you went back on yourself a little by saying whoever the champion is, then saying you wanted Jack for the title. Tiny detail, but that was a great roleplay! Well done!
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Post by Maverick on Sept 7, 2017 13:01:27 GMT -6
I'll put a 'feck' in the next one for you.
There is a reason for me saying I want to face Jack Diamond when Castle of Glass hasn't happened yet.
I was basically putting in my prediction for Castle of Glass.
Also I was expecting you to have a word on my RP. I expected you to say something about me telling you to grow a pair of balls over Rossdale's death
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 7, 2017 13:17:39 GMT -6
You left it there for me... That's always nice and I'm sure I'll hear it on a show like grimmys! Ah the prediction idea explains it then. Nice one.
Really impressed man.
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Chaos Kid
Opening Match Guy
Ironman Champion/Tag Team Champion
Posts: 396
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 7, 2017 14:36:34 GMT -6
Wow, you seem to be improving week upon week, you just have to look at your first rp and compare it with this one, the only thing that confused me is why change the font size half way though the rp?. But other than that you seem to have jumped a level, you are no longer the Brooklyn Brawler of ICW, but you are someone who should be taken seriously
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 7, 2017 14:50:19 GMT -6
Couldn't have put it better. If go as far as saying at a guess you have jumped 3 maybe 4 points scored. Keep putting these out and the wins WILL come.
A lot has to be said for your attitude. You lost a few matches and you went away, listened to advice and worked on it.
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Post by Maverick on Sept 7, 2017 15:13:50 GMT -6
Wow, you seem to be improving week upon week, you just have to look at your first rp and compare it with this one, the only thing that confused me is why change the font size half way though the rp?. But other than that you seem to have jumped a level, you are no longer the Brooklyn Brawler of ICW, but you are someone who should be taken seriously Was there? it looked like the same when I typed it. Simple mistake
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Post by "Scorpion" Steve Dackle on Sept 7, 2017 16:16:05 GMT -6
Really good bro.
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