Chaos Kid
Opening Match Guy
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Ironman Champion/Tag Team Champion
Posts: 396
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Post by Chaos Kid on Jun 28, 2017 23:31:40 GMT -6
This is probably my first RP in many years, but please I need to know where I can improve
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Jun 29, 2017 6:43:36 GMT -6
I really, really enjoyed reading this! There's a lot of depth to your character and I'm looking forward to seeing the comeback story!
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Jun 29, 2017 6:46:52 GMT -6
I'm new to this, this is my first efed or role playing game but you did pretty good all I can say is listen to the vets
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