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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 2:11:37 GMT -6
What did we all think then?
Barratt screwing over Chaos. Is this a new alliance or simply Barratt repaying the favours of earlier in the night? That final match was insane! Chaos was as close as anyone has come. Can anyone dethrone Jack?
Maverick joining Reiters prosperous ones after a solid win over Joe Carroll. Massive win for him there after a big improvement as of late. Well done man, but it seems that though people will start taking him seriously, he also has a large target on his back now. Primarily from Barratt following his comments.
Duke picks up a nice win there. On his road to cashing his case in and becoming the golden boy of ICW, he seems to have had a big resurgence as of late since joining Lucas.
Danny got a new car! The family will surely make good usage of it but will he afford to get it fixed? This one must have been close with Black, who had a great showing.
What are the thoughts then? Those are just a few of mine.
Great write up, the tension for that main event when chaos had CDM locked in was immense!
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Post by Mongo the Destroyer on Sept 14, 2017 7:49:33 GMT -6
Of course not, don't ask silly questions. The PPV was really good. Like I said before, I absolutely loved all the original match stipulations and the fact that the entire PPV was themed around glass. It begs the question of if the plan is to have the same PPVs every year or if we'll have new stuff all the time with just a few anchor PPVs (like the WWE's big four). So much blood, so much glass, so much glory. Very nice guys
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 8:48:12 GMT -6
The PPV was slightly edited. Like 1 sentence. Bobby brought it to my attention on a strat error. It reads proper now.
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Post by Maverick on Sept 14, 2017 8:49:54 GMT -6
What an awesome PPV. I was totally in shock when Maverick was joining Rieters Prosperous Ones. That made me jump off my seat
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 8:53:11 GMT -6
And as far as the feedback goes... I'll be cocky with this one some. It was a "good" show for sure. This is the kind of show most efeds CAN'T produce.
I did the intro, videos... etc... Jack did ALL OF THE Carroll/Maverick match and ALL OF THE 4 way. He was a tremendous help and it shows in his superb match writing skills.
This was our longest show without question. I've posted a couple Spectacles that came in the 6-8k range. This was 17,000 words.
Now longer doesn't mean better all the time (insert retarded joke here)
Although with my writing style and Jack's style we tend to keep anything in there interesting. It isn't mundane usually. At least we try. So in our case... the longer results go on, the better they are I think? Maybe? What do you guys think.
I've said before I'm not really big on having a long drawn out redundant match "just because". I'd rather have a 800-1,000 word match that is kickass than a 3,000 word match.
The thing is... Jack can write really long matches that are masterpieces. I cannot. In this case, the segments were heavy, the match writing was great (especially Jack's) and it all blended pretty well I think.
I need EVERYONE to comment as I spent maybe a total of 6 hours maybe 7 writing this fucker and I know Jack spent a good piece of time too. I'm not sure how much. We do type fast, but I would like some feedback. From all here. Thanks Bobby and Mongo for yours so far!
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 14, 2017 8:56:14 GMT -6
so many questions? So is Barrett ICW version of James Ellsworth and Diamond is Carmella cause he handed Diamond the belt, but he didn't win the match , and why Barrett why So if Duke is with Maverick, what would make Diamond/maverick vs Duke/chaos a match where both team have partners that dont like each other? is Newcomer Johnny Bulldog with Duke & Maverick? What is the nun all about? Why is mad dog wearing a dress in a KFC advert?
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 14, 2017 8:58:00 GMT -6
but that was the best ppv write up I've seen in a long time and what a amazing start with the ppv, it got me hooked from the very start
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 9:33:00 GMT -6
but that was the best ppv write up I've seen in a long time and what a amazing start with the ppv, it got me hooked from the very start Yes... I really really tried to draw people in with that intro. It was a big selling point for me. Glad people liked it!
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 9:34:09 GMT -6
so many questions? So is Barrett ICW version of James Ellsworth and Diamond is Carmella cause he handed Diamond the belt, but he didn't win the match , and why Barrett why So if Duke is with Maverick, what would make Diamond/maverick vs Duke/chaos a match where both team have partners that dont like each other? is Newcomer Johnny Bulldog with Duke & Maverick? What is the nun all about? Why is mad dog wearing a dress in a KFC advert? LMAO! I love these. Bulldog is face, and new. He was just running out there with them for the hell of it, and cause Rieter likes him. Nothing to that. Mad Dog got his break man. He's in that stuff lmao
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 9:35:08 GMT -6
Can't fault the show. It all felt big.
Though I got no idea how youre gonna top this in october
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 9:35:12 GMT -6
What an awesome PPV. I was totally in shock when Maverick was joining Rieters Prosperous Ones. That made me jump off my seat Very happy to see this. You deserved it. Take what happened and run with it. I'm counting on you.
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 9:35:46 GMT -6
What an awesome PPV. I was totally in shock when Maverick was joining Rieters Prosperous Ones. That made me jump off my seat Very happy to see this. You deserved it. Take what happened and run with it. I'm counting on you. And I'll be waiting on you.
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 14, 2017 9:45:18 GMT -6
and I'll be waiting for you, lol
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 9:58:55 GMT -6
Can't fault the show. It all felt big. Though I got no idea how youre gonna top this in october It might not be as long. Or might be as long... I mean we can't do 30k results. That is fucked. I'd expect 15k probably for the october show. Maybe 20k. I mean that is a ton. And yes. It will be topped. As long as people stay around, and try and invest, and we've got a roster to work with. It will be topped. I gurandamntee it
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 10:17:05 GMT -6
and I'll be waiting for you, lol Sounds like a threat. Remember what happened last time you came for this? *pats title belt*
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Post by Maverick on Sept 14, 2017 10:20:48 GMT -6
Very happy to see this. You deserved it. Take what happened and run with it. I'm counting on you. And I'll be waiting on you. I hope you are... I'm ready for you Bobby
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 14, 2017 11:02:53 GMT -6
and I'll be waiting for you, lol Sounds like a threat. Remember what happened last time you came for this? *pats title belt* one big difference I'm not coming for your belt, I'm coming for you
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 11:35:24 GMT -6
Oh baby!
Seems all is right with the world and the xhamp has a target on his fucking back again!
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Post by Chaos Kid on Sept 14, 2017 11:59:31 GMT -6
but you only have yourself to blame this time
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 12:08:49 GMT -6
Since when's that bothered me?!
Aside from Lucas. He just has issues. Man is looking for trouble and he's about to find it!
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 14, 2017 12:41:29 GMT -6
The PPV was awesome I like the fact that Chaos got screwed by Barratt it is a little payback for the fact Chaos gets a title shot for the new title even though it should be Barratts and Diamond is heading for a collision course with Duke it is bound to happen title or no title and I liked the fact Danny Ray won with out having to go against his principles and Black was so close to a win Steele just bad luck or bad business. Keep them coming like this and we will have people knocking down the door to join
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 13:03:03 GMT -6
The PPV was awesome I like the fact that Chaos got screwed by Barratt it is a little payback for the fact Chaos gets a title shot for the new title even though it should be Barratts and Diamond is heading for a collision course with Duke it is bound to happen title or no title and I liked the fact Danny Ray won with out having to go against his principles and Black was so close to a win Steele just bad luck or bad business. Keep them coming like this and we will have people knocking down the door to join To be fair, the 3rd title is nothing to do with me. It's going to be entirely separate from the ironman title, but chaos was given a shot duebto forfeiting his title.
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Post by Lucas Rieter (Owner) on Sept 14, 2017 13:36:24 GMT -6
The PPV was awesome I like the fact that Chaos got screwed by Barratt it is a little payback for the fact Chaos gets a title shot for the new title even though it should be Barratts and Diamond is heading for a collision course with Duke it is bound to happen title or no title and I liked the fact Danny Ray won with out having to go against his principles and Black was so close to a win Steele just bad luck or bad business. Keep them coming like this and we will have people knocking down the door to join They have been coming like this. Not in this size, but the quality has always been there I think? Chaos in real life came to me about dropping the title for an angle. So naturally, if a new belt is ever made, he would get a crack at it right off. It is fair. I mean he dropped the belt dude. That's how it works. Chaos could still possibly be Ironman Champion if he hadn't asked about that angle and all that. Barratt's belt was combined with Ironman. So it is truly a 2nd tier belt with Steele's, Stetson's great defenses prestiged into it. The new belt will be a hardcore only type belt. But in theory will be a 4th tier belt. It will be the 3rd best belt in singles yes, but it is a gimmick belt and will be considered slightly under the Ironman in prestige. I guess if someone defends a hardcore belt enough it could become a 3rd tier belt.
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Post by Bobby Barratt on Sept 14, 2017 13:49:27 GMT -6
It only takes a few great defences to add prestige.
24/7 rule anyone?
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Post by Duke Kosloff on Sept 14, 2017 13:54:56 GMT -6
Okay, I wasn't complaining I was just saying kind of storyline as Chaos lost the Ironman title unification match to Barratt thus it would make sense that Boby get the shot It's all cool so I hope no one took it the wrong way
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